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ITALY POV

Italy stood beside the window overlooking his garden. The day was bright and cheerful. Flowers bloomed and birds sang in the trees. Puffy white clouds dotted the sky. Everything was bright and green and full of light.

Italy threw the curtain back in disgust, casting the room into darkness once again. Light and peace, that was the moral of so many that he had destroyed. He had bathed that moral countless times in blood. Darkness and Chaos, Blood and Evil. Those were his morals. He had never hesitated to hurt anyone who disobeyed him.

So why did he stop when you flinched away from him? He was perfectly used to it by now. He shouldn't even be surprised that you were terrified of him. Yet for a split second before his hand reach out, he felt something strange. It wasn't anger or frustration. It was a type of sadness.

Remorse.

Italy gripped his hair in frustration. Remorse?! Guilt?!? Why should he, of all people, experience such emotions? He was a prince of darkness, bathed in the blood of his enemies. Yet when you stared at him with those wide, terrified eyes, he felt something stab at his heart.

"Lutz!" he snapped, eyes blazing.

From some obscure corner or hidden doorway, his right hand man appeared. His hair was slicked back roughly as usual, jacket hanging from his shoulders. He stared at the Italian silently from the brim of his cap, arms crossed.

Italy paced furiously in front of him, hands tangled in his hair. Lutz raised a curious eyebrow but remained silent. It was better to keep silent when his comrade was angry.

A series of disconnected mumbles came from Italy's mouth. "I can't...she wont-but.....I...ARGH!" The knife in his hand flew across the room, to stick in the wall with a solid 'Thunk!' 

A few moments passed. A heavy silence hung in the room as Lutz waited patiently for the Italian to compose himself.

Italy let out a heavy sigh, then turned to Lutz with his cheerful smile. "Mi dispiacare." he apologized. "If you need me, I shall be in the Master Suite."

Lutz gave an almost imperceptible nod. 

"I want ________ in the library at noon, on the dot. Have my lunch delivered there."

He casually walked over to the wall, plucking the knife out of the tiny cinch in the wall made deep by hundreds of throwing efforts.

As Lutz watched his leader saunter away, twirling the blade in his hand, he couldn't help but overhear him humming a familiar song.

Your song.

Sorry guys, short chapter tonight. I'm tired after swim team, and I'm lacking creative out-put right now.

BUT HEY, suggestions, comments, and favorites are all appreciated and shall aide on the way back to creative creepy writing!
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:iconqueenofbadassea:
" if their was no darkness their would be no love no music and no art"  I think this quote matches this fic 
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Superdaughter2 Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2014
I understand too well of weary from swimming too much XD thank you for writing this! Can't wait to read next!
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IketheCOOL Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014
My dad forced me to go to sleep early yesterday AND I WAS READING THIS!! I COULDN'T WAIT TO GET UP AND READ THIS!!
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gabrielaperez1 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Girl: Do u even want to be with me forever? Boy: No Girl: Do u even like me? Boy: No Girl: Would u cry if i walked away? Boy: No She heard enough and was hurt... She walked away with tears in her eyes The boy grabbed her arm Boy: Your not pretty...your beautiful Boy: I dont want to be with u forever...I need to be with u forever Boy: I dont like u...I love u Boy: I wouldn't cry if u walked away......I would die if u walked away. Boy Whispers: Plz stay with me Girl: I will... *Tonight at midnight your true love will realize they loves u *Something good will happen to u at 1-4pm *Tomorrow it could be anywhere!!! *Get ready for the shock of your life! *If u dont post this to 5 other comments... You will have baD luck in relationships for the next 10 year
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Student Writer
....You do realize how much I despise comments such as these.
Consider this a warning: Please do not do this in the future, or I shall flag it as spam.
Thank you.
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gabrielaperez1 Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
okay vatever you zay
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musicalraz Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OOOH THAT`S GOOD!
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
............rereading this it makes me want to draw it as a comic.... XD
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
*o* That would be soooo cool.
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gymleader97 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
Kesesesesese, I could probably have a go at it... Meh I guess I will I have nothing better to do, Christmas Vacation and such.
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
..... :D .......... ...... now i REALLY want to do it. ................. :D
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:iconzephyros22:
Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
:la: If you did, even a tiny strip, I would worship you, forever!!!
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
.............:3 .............. 
OKAY OKAY OKAY I'LL TRY. 
:iconsqueeeeplz:
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
AAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!! :icondeanspazplz:
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
X3 :iconflailingplz:
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Student Writer
:iconblushplz:
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pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
this is so freaking amazing.... you write so well! When he threw the knife in the wall i could literally hear the THUNK. It makes me feel jittery and AWESOME. :iconcannotevenplz:
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 27, 2013  Student Writer
:iconcblushplz: Daww, you are too sweet. Thank you very much. :3
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:iconpozolegirl:
pozolegirl Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:3 you are welcome.
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This. Is. :iconfabulousplz:
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:iconzephyros22:
Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Writer
Lol, thank you. :3
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm sorry but I just REALLY like your profile pic XDDD 
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
Hehe, thank you. A friend doodled it for me. :3
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Tell your friend it's very AWESOME 

And i just suck :iconrazycryplz::iconlazycryplz::iconlazecryplz: 
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
You don't suck. :hug:
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HailleyPie Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:iconletmehugyouplz: 
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2013  Student Writer
:iconyuihugplz:
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IcyMassacre Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Student Writer
Can't.
Stop.
Reading.
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FanGirl08 Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Awesome!! Now I'm off to read the next one!! ;) I love these way too much -_-"
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XioItalyPruX3 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I WANT TO SCREAM IN FEAR!!!!
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BlackBloodWolf554 Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This happens to me too... :iconfacepalmplz: It is called writers block. It sucks! I have it right now for LiM and PWaDB!
LiM-Short for Love is Magic.(I can't keep writing creepy stuff.)
PWaDB-Short for Pure White and Dark Black.(few parts are creepy. :iconcreepysmileplz: )
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Summermist13 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2013
More please?
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BlueLight01 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Great chapter!!!! So creepy!
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emmychan-1 Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013
Baby <3
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hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
hahahahaha!!!!!!his frustration is my lafter
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CosmicXReaction Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013
Laughter*
Sorry if i angered you by correcting the grammar 😅
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hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
????oh.....no you dident anger me
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CosmicXReaction Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2013
thanks :)
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hetaliafangirlneko Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
u welcome
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2013  Student General Artist
I can't to read more!!!!!
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Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student Writer
Daww, thank you.
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xXArtimisXx Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2013  Student General Artist
You're welcome! This is a really good story!!
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Picopicomietso Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
must......... have.............PART FOUR
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:iconzephyros22:
Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
It's already up! Away~!
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Picopicomietso Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
SORRY IM USING MY IPODTOUCH SO yeeeeaaahhh.....
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013
*jumps* Watch where you're throwing that knife!!
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:iconzephyros22:
Zephyros22 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013  Student Writer
:iconsexy2pitalyplz: Problem, Bella?
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sarpndo Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013
Geep! No...
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AquerianKnight Featured By Owner Mar 19, 2013
Where's the rest of the story?
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CandideDelights Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It's 'Mi dispiace'.
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